Round Two
We submitted our review video on Monday with a lot of changes. We're looking forward to seeing how we can improve every aspect of our advert.
Today we presented a version of our commercial with the portal effect integrated into it. We also included a more detailed look at our character.
The mentors from Harbor commented on our advertisement and made the following suggestions:
Be conscious of the speed of the camera. When motion blur is added, it may been hard to see the character and the portal effect. Consider how the particles will look like once they are rendered with motion blur.
Maybe continue the animation of the GPU so we don't sit too long on a static frame. Continuing the fan animation would be a good idea.
Going forward, we'll implement these changes into our advertisement.
